Now for something totally different...

[arajca]

I am finishing an English Comp course. My final essay/research paper deals with CAP and NIMS. I would greatly appreciate it if some of the folks here could give me a quick critique on it. Feel free to mark it up, just please use different color text.

Thank you.

PS. It gets turned Sunday, 8/12/07.

[Camas]

You get an "A".  Good work. I've converted the file to a .pdf file and I'd like to use it here in ORWG - if I have your permission.

[floridacyclist]

I tried to email it back (just a couple of minor typos) but your address is hidden. Mine is gfloyd@tallahasseecap.org if you want to drop me a line.

[arajca]

You get an "A".  Good work. I've converted the file to a .pdf file and I'd like to use it here in ORWG - if I have your permission.

When I get the final version back and corrected, I'll post it here for all to use if they want.

[arajca]

Final grade on essay: 95%. I still had some stupid typo's.

PM me if you want a copy of the final paper. Feel free to use it with appropriate credit.

[floridacyclist]

  on typos (see prior post)

It was a very good paper. Think anyone higher up will read it?

[NEBoom]

Final grade on essay: 95%. I still had some stupid typo's.

PM me if you want a copy of the final paper. Feel free to use it with appropriate credit.

Congrats on the good grade.  Did you end up making any major changes to it?  I'd like to use it at least as a reference for myself.

Thanks.

[SAR-EMT1]

Final grade on essay: 95%. I still had some stupid typo's.

PM me if you want a copy of the final paper. Feel free to use it with appropriate credit.

Would love a copy.
BTW...did you think of submitting it as a "BEST PRACTICE"  at nhq?

[arajca]

Final grade on essay: 95%. I still had some stupid typo's.

PM me if you want a copy of the final paper. Feel free to use it with appropriate credit.

Upload is working, here is the paper.

[Skyray]

Very nicely done!  Excellent analysis!  The only comment I can think of is that I might have outlined what CAP had before NIMS and compared and contrasted the two.  That might have been a little too much, as it was the paper ran to almost 3,000 words.  Again, nicely done.

[Major Carrales]

How did this turn out?

[arajca]

95 out of 100 pts.

[Major Carrales]

95 out of 100 pts.

Outstanding!!!

[arajca]

The scary part is the class average was 77.

[Skyray]

The scary part is the class average was 77.

Proving once more that CAP trained students excell.

[Major Carrales]

I am finishing an English Comp course. My final essay/research paper deals with CAP and NIMS. I would greatly appreciate it if some of the folks here could give me a quick critique on it. Feel free to mark it up, just please use different color text.

Thank you.

PS. It gets turned Sunday, 8/12/07.

Was this a University Course?  I assume it was.

77 is a shame.  I can understand in High School where high achievers and meshuggners share the same classes, but College Level folks are paying for it.  

[docspur]

95 out of 100 pts.

CONGRATULATIONS! Well done.